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I open my eyes to total dark,
my mind spins.  Where am I?
I look around, but there is no mark.
Nothing to tell me how, or why.

I stand without knowing.
I try to feel my way, but I cannot feel.
I wonder, where is it I'm going?
There is pain all around, but nothing to heal.

Two paths before me burn bright.
The light fills my eyes.
The choices are day, or eternal night.
No way of knowing which way each path lies.

I scream in frustration, with no one to hear.
I step onto a path with eyes pressed shut.
I cannot breath, my throat is closed with fear.
Soon I will know if I'm saved, or cut.
©2008 ~A-Rose-in-the-Dark
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I wrote this just a couple of days ago. I'm at a tough decision in my life, and have no idea what to do. I'm lost.
T_T
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~YugiGirl:iconYugiGirl: May 14, 2008, 12:58:52 PM
A tough decision? D:

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;-; We'll miss you, Croc Hunter.

Fear the SasuSaku fantard. :D

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~Jobi-WanKenobi:iconJobi-WanKenobi: May 14, 2008, 2:19:14 PM
You know I'm here for ya. I'm doing my best to help. :heart:

It sounds like a nightmare, the poem. Like when you're in the black room you can't escape... but like.. you're not really there. o___o
Yeah, I don't make sense.

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Je suis l'amoureuse de Link. Il est mon petit ami. Il n'est pas pour toi.
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May the Triforce be with you. :3
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~A-Rose-in-the-Dark:iconA-Rose-in-the-Dark: May 17, 2008, 11:27:09 AM
I'll tell you about it next time we talk, if you remember to bring it up.

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Sometimes the mind, for reasons we don't necessarily understand, just decides to go to the store for a quart of milk.
98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
~A-Rose-in-the-Dark:iconA-Rose-in-the-Dark: May 17, 2008, 11:28:34 AM
Thank you. you're such a great friend. :hug:

It is ment to be nightmare-ish. You make kinda sense. ^_^

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Sometimes the mind, for reasons we don't necessarily understand, just decides to go to the store for a quart of milk.
98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
~YugiGirl:iconYugiGirl: May 18, 2008, 7:18:38 AM
Okay. D:

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September 4th-R.I.P. Steve Irwin

;-; We'll miss you, Croc Hunter.

Fear the SasuSaku fantard. :D

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~Jobi-WanKenobi:iconJobi-WanKenobi: May 23, 2008, 2:56:06 PM
; ; Baw. You are, too, miss. For putting up with me when I was on Prozac. xD <3333

Yay. Making sense is good. 8D lol. :hug:

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Je suis l'amoureuse de Link. Il est mon petit ami. Il n'est pas pour toi.
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May the Triforce be with you. :3
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~zeldafreakhall ~the-twili-tribe ~The-Twilight-Realm ~Dragons-And-Wolves *SHARK-ARMY
~A-Rose-in-the-Dark:iconA-Rose-in-the-Dark: May 25, 2008, 7:15:02 PM
xD
I can't wait to see you again. :P

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Sometimes the mind, for reasons we don't necessarily understand, just decides to go to the store for a quart of milk.
98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
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